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Very interesting, in-depth thoughts in her story. Thanks for posting.
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I like that poem! :) I'm sure I'll reread it many times.
Very thoughtful reflections. Her language is very evocative. I particularly like this image regarding the coming of Fall:
Those leaves that would taint the goats milk
and crawl onto my porch.
They called me to many things;
to the turn of the season, a time of felling and fires,
heavy gunmetal skies against birches,
withered corn scraping and rattling under the moon.
good work.
Nice job! Thanks for sharing. :)
Deidre evoked very vivid images, making the fall firewood cutting come to life.
Beautiful.
I bet your wife has a few more poems tucked around that we might like. :) :)
Just because many of us are crusty ole sawdust makers doesn't mean we can't appreciate beauty in words.
Nice :)
Quote from: Cedarman on December 29, 2013, 08:01:36 AM
Deidre evoked very vivid images, making the fall firewood cutting come to life.
Beautiful.
I bet your wife has a few more poems tucked around that we might like. :) :)
Just because many of us are crusty ole sawdust makers doesn't mean we can't appreciate beauty in words.
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I will never look at firewood cutting the same again.
She sure does have a way with words.
Very nice. You should get member "Bust Beaver Lumber" to carve your poem into a piece of wood. :)
Quote from: POSTONLT40HD on December 29, 2013, 09:28:19 AM
Very nice. You should get member "Bust Beaver Lumber" to carve t your poem into a piece of wood. :)
+1 :)
Tell Deidre 'thank you!'
She did great. I enjoyed the whole poem, but paused and reread the leaves rising like bats wings as it was a great image.
A wonderful prose depiction of ritual and the circle of life. Enjoyed it greatly. Thank you?
Quote from: POSTONLT40HD on December 29, 2013, 09:28:19 AM
Very nice. You should get member "Bust Beaver Lumber" to carve your poem into a piece of wood. :)
I think Busy Beaver Lumber does better work, he wont BUST things up as much. :D
Quote from: gspren on December 29, 2013, 11:09:05 AM
Quote from: POSTONLT40HD on December 29, 2013, 09:28:19 AM
Very nice. You should get member "Bust Beaver Lumber" to carve your poem into a piece of wood. :)
I think Busy Beaver Lumber does better work, he wont BUST things up as much. :D
I see my spelling mistake now. :D My fingers did not mean to misspell your name BUSY.
Thanks GERPEN.
Meant to type BUSY BEAVER....not BUST BEAVER. I went back and changed it.
Y'all nose I can't spell. :)
What a very nice expression of feelings with words. :)
thank you for all your thoughtful comments. this is the first time she has ever let anyone read any of her writing.
I hope she will share more with us. :)
nice, thanks